unfinished

unfinished
unfinished

stepping away
wedding bells steam trains
you promised a dance
a little dance
before I ran away

music dj laid down her beats
sweat pulses drunken orgy of dance

exit sign dimly lit as you headed out the door
the song
unfinished

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12 thoughts on “unfinished”

  1. You always get that lost mood going–so few words, yet just repeating one of them three times makes the piece a hammer. ‘exit sign dimly lit’ ends with a strong visual swimming in a fog of inchoate memory.

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